Score: 7

"Another Stick Animation"

submission: Die in Style

date: August 6, 2003

The author knows a bit more about motion and animation than the average flash animator on Newgrounds, it’s too bad it is wasted on stick figures. The flash is good, aside from the stick figure graphics. I just hope the next flash the author makes will feature non-stick figure graphics, but with the same quality and effort put into them.

Score: 5

"You have potential."

submission: Cam Super Sayain*color*

date: July 29, 2003

The graphics can use some work, I suggest looking for some drawing tutorials online. You can use some work on getting proportions right. Also I suggest putting more effort into the sky and backgrounds, the sky was white the whole time.

The audio was just sound clips from DBZ. It could of used some voice acting. the text was hard to read over the white background.

The overall movie was okay, though I do suggest that you try and keep a distance from DBZ, it’s been done to death. You have some non-DBZ characters, which is a good start. But the “super sayian “ element is unique to DBZ; maybe work on a different physical transformation rather than the DBZ one.